Seduction in Blood - Comments

Please update more and soon! I really love this story and wanna know what'd happen next with Aria.. :)

So I normally don't pay much attention to the things that are recommended to me by my friends on mibba. They show up on my mibba page and I tend to just glance at them. I'm very glad your title caught my attention.
(I don't know if you get the comment posted on a certain chapter, but this was the prologue.) I thought that your writing style is very nice. I really like the imagery you have given us with the words you chose. Nikolas and Darrien haveboth intrigued me, as has Ethan and the mysterious she.
From what I have read of Darrien, he seems like a coldly powerful person/vampire that actually does care about this someone. Good job with this chapter.
(Sorry if this is a slightly long comment. I have a tendency to leave long comments.... so yeah...)

Comment Swap. I read the prologue, and chapter one so far and I am immensed in this story already. I love the characters that I met so far including Darrien, he seemed extremely troubled and sad over losing a girl that he loved, I was curious, is she a vampire as well. BTW all the details, metaphors as well as imagery I got just by reading the prologue proves what a great writer you are. I feel so bad for Aria, her ex is a scumbag, I can't believe that he posted that heinous status about her, is Samantha supposed to be her bestfriend? I really can't wait to read more.

P.S Chapter 2 was not at all boring lol, I was intrigued and I love the layout you selected for your story, I felt myself drawn to it instantly (funny vampires have that affect on people).

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This is fantastic! I love how well-written the chapters are and how you can easily separate the characters with their personality. I haven't seen any grammars or typo, so kudos. Even though comment swap brought me here, I'm glad it did. I've subscribed hoping to read more. Keep up the great work! I'm a sucker for vamp stories and this immediately sparked my interest. I really do hope you update soon!

(Hope this worked... lol)

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I've read further and I genuinely love this story! Your writing is amazing, it takes me away and I'm reading and reading and it's like I'm in a bubble. And your characters are just magical, especially Nikolas. This is one of the few vampire stories I like actually. Keep writing like this, 'cause you're really talented :)

Crysta, you already know how much I love your writing!
This story in particular has such amazing descriptions and it's all so mysterious.

It kind of reminds me of The Vampire Dairies due to the two brothers, which I can't decide who I like more. Ethan seems more carefree and wild, but Darien is just so stoic and calm. They are total opposites, but I love it!

Nicholas is amazing too, I really wanna know more about him. Please continue this story, it's amazing and such a dark romance and I just can't even explain how wonderful it is.

The update is amazing as always! I can't wait to read more ^_^

I really like this story, it's extremely well written. I felt as if I was reading a professionally published story, the editing was so perfect. I'm only on the prologue but I look forward to reading the rest. This really isn't what I usually read, but I'm extremely interested now and your writing is just so flawless wow.

Our names are almost similar, exciting! Love how this is turning out :D

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This story is great: it has a good summary, an attractive layout, interesting and well developed characters... I just love the way you write! I haven't finished reading everything yet but I will! This story is great!! I hope I get the time to finish it!

You are a fantastic writer.
Just thought I should let you know.

I will be back.

First I gotta say the summary is pretty good. The story is well defined and the characters are great. The vocabulary is excellent, it literally sucks me into the story. The layout seems to match it as well. It gives it a nice atmosphere to it, something lively.
I do look forward to some more!

Your layout is very striking. I like your descriptions, as well. You put words together that I would have never thought of. Rhythmic violins, for example, or a voice dipped in venom. Your characterization, too, is wonderful. I like Aria's personality very much. One thing, though, is that there are places in your writing that could really use a nice semicolon.

your a great writer!!
I hope you update soon
subscribed ^.^

cant wait for the next one! have fun writing :)

The summary was amazing; it was so descriptive and led me wanting more. The first chapter was great as well. I'm really curious about Darien and what part the council will play as. Also what role will Nikolas play. I have all these questions, aha. Chapter Two was great as well. I loved how you described Aria and Samantha's personalities. And Johnny sounds like a real ass. Seriously, you don't post shut like that on Facebook. Ugh. Chapter Three was really intense, aha, what with killing of 'Johnny' and that cloaked figure. Everything just flowed naturally and perfectly (:

So far, I really like how this story is progressing. It's beautiful and interesting and it flows perfectly.

Update soon! I'm entranced; completely entralled!!!

Well, I started reading more, and you asked for my honest opinion. Your spelling is great, but you have some run-on sentences I think. Instead of commas, when you come to a sentence that ends and starts another one, you should use a semi-colon. Sometimes, it happens to me too, so that's why I use Microsoft word to write chapters. I understand that some people can't, but I thought I would just put that out there to help!

Okay, so I had to stop to comment after the first chapter because I think I love this a lot. I find it really hard to find stories with a lot of description and thought into them, especially through comment swap, so that I find a story I like, so this is just awesome in my mind. I love the description you use, and you have a pretty good vocabulary. That's hard to get from me too though, since I keep a dictionary at my desk so that I know every word I read in a book. ^-^ Keep writing!

OHH SNAP. like fo rull though. Hahah, i read the title and was like ooh.. shivers. and then i read the summary and i was like crap.. now i really like have to read this because like omg haha. it's obvious its a vampire story, but i think those can be interesting when written correctly and it has been written correctly. my only complaint, i love the layout but i don't like the layout picture. it's very hard for me to get past when trying to read the story. it looks immature, and that is so.. not what your story is about. the two don't support each other. but that's it! keep up the good work.