Waiting for my sun to shine. - Comments

AHYEGWE I LUBB DIS <3

I love this so far. It's like love at first sight haha. I feel sorry for Layla because her parents didn't even seem to care she was leaving, i would have been a mess if that were me. Anyways can't wait to see what happens at the party. :)

Aw yes thank you. Chapter two will be up by 12 am EST at the latest. I can almost promise it'll be up before that. :) I'm going to make him very sweet, because when I met him he was literally the sweetest ball of sunshine ever haha. Thank you!

This is really good so far. Her parents seem like dicks. My mom would be a blubbering mess if I told her I was moving to Arizona. She'd buy the plane ticket right next to mine lol. In any case, I'm excited to be meeting John. He's a sweet heart in real life, but I'm excited to see how you portray him. Your writing was perfect, I didn't see any mistakes, then again I was reading for pleasure, not as an editor.

Happy writing!