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  • littlemisslex

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    AHYEGWE I LUBB DIS <3
    July 29th, 2012 at 11:49pm
  • Stay With Me:-.....

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    I love this so far. It's like love at first sight haha. I feel sorry for Layla because her parents didn't even seem to care she was leaving, i would have been a mess if that were me. Anyways can't wait to see what happens at the party. :)
    July 29th, 2012 at 02:06am
  • woeisrebecca

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    Aw yes thank you. Chapter two will be up by 12 am EST at the latest. I can almost promise it'll be up before that. :) I'm going to make him very sweet, because when I met him he was literally the sweetest ball of sunshine ever haha. Thank you!
    July 27th, 2012 at 06:26pm
  • heeytara

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    This is really good so far. Her parents seem like dicks. My mom would be a blubbering mess if I told her I was moving to Arizona. She'd buy the plane ticket right next to mine lol. In any case, I'm excited to be meeting John. He's a sweet heart in real life, but I'm excited to see how you portray him. Your writing was perfect, I didn't see any mistakes, then again I was reading for pleasure, not as an editor.

    Happy writing!
    July 27th, 2012 at 05:13pm
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