What a lovely little story. It's simply perfect. Comment swap brought me this way, and I'm glad it did. And, the theme is a major plus. It's put together so beautifully and it goes so well with the story. I'm only a few chapters in, but when I finish my work, I'm going to finish reading.
I love the background, picture, and the texture of the custom layout. It really flowws with the story. But, I like it. It's pretty good. I know am not familiar with the character of the story, but yet I enjoyed it. I did not notice any grammar or spelling error, if there was I didn't notice. I actually am not good at English to point that stuff out. Also I'm not much of a critizer because everyone has their own flows of how they write their story. Great chapters I really liked them, this story did keep me in interest. Nice writing skills. Good work(: Keep it up
You lovely creature you, thanks for the mention. You deserve more comments. Gerard is deffo the better fucker. UPDATES LOVE! *Your spacing out makes me lol*