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  • So_Damn_Creepy

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    Amazing story(;
    January 24th, 2013 at 03:22am
  • So_Damn_Creepy

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    I love this story<3 (; Mr. Green
    November 17th, 2012 at 11:21pm
  • goatman

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    What a lovely little story. It's simply perfect.
    Comment swap brought me this way, and I'm glad it did.
    And, the theme is a major plus. It's put together so beautifully and it goes so well with the story.
    I'm only a few chapters in, but when I finish my work, I'm going to finish reading.
    November 5th, 2012 at 04:12am
  • archivist

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    Mrpph. Lovely.
    ~needs update.
    Going to sleep now.
    October 8th, 2012 at 05:54am
  • So_Damn_Creepy

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    This story is amazing Mr. Green Mr. Green
    October 7th, 2012 at 03:21am
  • XChemically_BrokenX

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    Perfection as always <3
    October 7th, 2012 at 02:42am
  • archivist

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    U no disagree with me! Though pft, like I'd know. Maybe you're right. I dunno.
    This turned awkward quickly.
    u.u I'm going back to reading it now.
    August 26th, 2012 at 07:52am
  • SheeranSweetheart

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    Comment Swap;

    I love the background, picture, and the texture of the custom layout. It really flowws with the story. But, I like it. It's pretty good. I know am not familiar with the character of the story, but yet I enjoyed it. I did not notice any grammar or spelling error, if there was I didn't notice. I actually am not good at English to point that stuff out. Also I'm not much of a critizer because everyone has their own flows of how they write their story. Great chapters I really liked them, this story did keep me in interest. Nice writing skills. Good work(: Keep it up Very Happy
    August 22nd, 2012 at 05:10pm
  • backinyourhead_

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    more please! :)
    August 20th, 2012 at 08:57pm
  • archivist

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    DON'T MAKE ME HATE MR. ARMSTRONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    August 8th, 2012 at 08:17pm
  • archivist

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    Because, duuuuh, he's Gerard. Don't get the gist, read Last Night on Earth. Billierard, love!
    August 8th, 2012 at 08:14pm
  • archivist

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    You lovely creature you, thanks for the mention. You deserve more comments. Gerard is deffo the better fucker. UPDATES LOVE! *Your spacing out makes me lol*
    August 5th, 2012 at 08:22am
  • archivist

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    Oh, paragraph third to last, you continue making my day. I want a teacher named Mr. Armstrong.
    August 2nd, 2012 at 08:51am
  • archivist

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    Read paragraph one, saw Green Day and was hooked. If you can get my attention that fast, you have a fucking epic story. Keep writing :D
    August 2nd, 2012 at 08:50am