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  • xxLIZxx

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    No update????!!!! Aaaah!
    September 13th, 2012 at 09:17pm
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    I'm hooked! I love this story and can't wait for more! Update soon! :D
    August 2nd, 2012 at 10:28pm
  • femme fatale.

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    Okay, part two of this comment. So, I'm from comment swap and I wanted to bookmark this story, which explains the comment below. SO here it goes.

    I like this. Your writing style is rad. Your descriptions are really great, and I like the metaphors in this. I'm looking forward to learning more about this ghost. She seems ... interesting. I'd like to know her back story.

    This is a good hook, but it could use a little more development. Good luck and update soon!
    July 28th, 2012 at 06:32am
  • femme fatale.

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    Oh nice, I kind of dig this. It's really creative. There are some things that could be worked on, but really, I like it. I look forward to chapter two.
    July 27th, 2012 at 10:23pm
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