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I think this story is very interesting. I will definitely keep reading. I too believe that its dark, but I like dark. I think it is very well written and I'm definitely going to subscribe and recommend. Can't wait for the update (: Keep up the good work.

Love, love this story. It's so dark and the plot is so, I don't know.. taboo? I love the way you've written it and the way you've developed the characters Adeline and Michael. Adeline is so driven to take care of Michael and the fact she's willing to do something quite dangerous is interesting. You write the subject of homelessness and addiction so well, hope you update soon!

This is an interesting story so far. Please update soon!

this looks like such a cute/lovely story! subscribed!

@ obliviate
Ah! Thank you<3

Hi, thought I let you know that you are in my recommendation list (: blog

Btw really good update!

This story is amazingly written!! I cannot wait to read more from you(:

You mentioned me!:') <33 haha and I loved the chapter, please update soon!:)

@ obliviate
Thanks so much! <3

This is different and really good (:

aww i really like this story!! Please update. <3 xx

i can't wait to read more! It is simply a fantastic story.

What a well crafted story... I'm in awe.
I rarely feel such emotion for characters as I did for Adeline. Everything about her breaks my heart.
Gosh, I'm so looking forward to reading more. It's just...beautiful!

Wow. I had to look at the info to find out who this was about, and when I read "One Direction" I was very skeptical. But your writing is amazing. Your French had no mistakes, which is a beautiful thing to see. I saw no grammar or spelling mistakes. This is truly an amazing story. You have my rec. and my subscription. Very, very good.

This is such a lovely story. It's very well written and it really makes you feel for Adeline and Michael. I hope the boys will be able to rescue her! :)

holy mother of god. I am so in love with every bit of this already.

This is a well written story, and I love the plot.
Your style of writing is amazing, and I love that you incorporated French.
I didn't catch any grammar mistakes either, which is great.
I can't wait for your next chapter! :)

Wow. Just wow. This is one of the first amazing stories I've gotten on comment swap. I'm literally stunned, because your writing is so well done and is just beautiful. This story is all around beautiful. Wow. Just wow. I can't get over it. And the guy she bought food from putting biscuits into her bag. asjdlkgsaj This is just so good.