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this is honestly so amazing, and as others have said: i love your writing style. it really paints a picture. one thing though: in your summary it says they were in a fatal car accident but it's only fatal if you die c: sorry to be nitpicky. love this.

I love the layout. It's easy on the eyes.
I love the quality that the writing exudes. It's like some sort of sad dreamworld full of greys and lack of emotion except there's tonnes of emotion you feel me? I have so many questions like how does the first part of the first chapter have to do with the whole story, why did (does?) Kyra want to die (although this is just me assuming things so feel free to ignore that bit), how does Corey have to do with most of the things, etc.

I have to say I like the writing the best. I mean yeah, I've got tonnes of questions, but the writing makes reading enjoyable and worthwhile.

I am in love with this story so far. It's really mysterious and I really like it. As of now I'm thinking Summer's a ghost possibly or something, I don't even know but this is really good. Update soon!

This story has me anticipating the next post. You are a great writer with original and intriguing thoughts.

beautiful. i really have no words to describe this....

Awesome story so far :) Excellent writing and very touching story. Can't wait to read more :)

I love your layout, it's quite beautiful.

I can't imagine how Summer feels. Car accidents are called accidents for a reason. It's no one's fault, but I suppose Kyra had to blame someone.

This is an extremely delayed reply to you from my blog where I gave out free story comments (posted about a week ago).

First things first: the layout = perfection. No words can describe it any further.

I'm also absolutely in love with the plot line of this story. I like that you didn't give everything away in the first chapter or just one bulky chapter; you spread it out through a couple and left the reader yearning for more. The characters were developed in such a way that it makes me feel like they're the people at school that I think I know but as it turns out I really don't. They're mysterious. I like that.

You have an amazing skill in writing and I applaud you. Well done. Honestly. I can't find any flaws in this story and usually I'm a scrutinizing grandmother when it comes to grammar.

Wow. That's all I can say. You kind of left me speechless.
This story really deserves more attention than what it's currently getting.

Wow.

This is an amazing read! Kept me hooked from the start!

This is so amazing. As pallid. said, I don't know how this doesn't have anymore comments. I have never read anything like this and it's amazing and I hope you do decide to go on with it. The background is perfect. This isn't a comment swap, by the way. I'm so utterly hung up with this, it's so amazing. Your writing style is fabulous.

I don't know how this doesn't have any comments, honestly. I have never read anything like this before.

I absolutely adore your writing style, and this story on a whole is so perfect. It's an absolute gem.
Your writing style and flow is so beautiful, as well. All that I have read was written so flawlessly.

I seriously cannot wait to read more.