Okay so this is the right story right!!!! I think so, sorry for the confusion on the Viktor story!!!! :\ See told ya I'm a Blonde, but I still like the Viktor story!!! XD
Anyways on to this one love that the female characters name is something different. I really like the name Langley. I really like that you took this in a different direction and instead of Langley forgiving Steve, like a lot of people probably would have done and have her give him a second chance. You let them let go of each other and to move on. I'm glad that Jack was there for her as the friend though and wanted to be there for her. But darn Jeff Carter for getting people in trouble once again.
Although it would have been kind of funny had she acted a little madder at Jack for setting her up like that. And I'm glad that Steve is ok with Langley going out with a teammate.
So anyways once again like I said in the Viktor story. I have given out a couple of extensions until the 22nd, so I will announce winners on the 24th of August!!!
Anyways on to this one love that the female characters name is something different. I really like the name Langley. I really like that you took this in a different direction and instead of Langley forgiving Steve, like a lot of people probably would have done and have her give him a second chance. You let them let go of each other and to move on. I'm glad that Jack was there for her as the friend though and wanted to be there for her. But darn Jeff Carter for getting people in trouble once again.
Although it would have been kind of funny had she acted a little madder at Jack for setting her up like that. And I'm glad that Steve is ok with Langley going out with a teammate.
So anyways once again like I said in the Viktor story. I have given out a couple of extensions until the 22nd, so I will announce winners on the 24th of August!!!