Not Everything Goes Your Way - Comments

Soullust (100)

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Sequel pllleeeasssseee

November 4th, 2012 at 07:11pm

EmilyM (100)

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Omg the ending was perfect. Sequel please c:

November 2nd, 2012 at 11:39am

Anatome17 (100)

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i love it !!!! and can't wait for the rest.I think you did a really fantastic story as well :)

October 13th, 2012 at 12:39pm

Soullust (100)

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I am so sad she had a cord knot. That happen to two of my friends within 2 months of each other. It was the hardest thing to accept. The story was amazing.

October 11th, 2012 at 04:01am

abc500 (100)

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I really like this so far, excited to see where it goes! I think she needs to tell him shes pregnant soon and i hope he takes it well because they are so cute! To improve, I would say to maybe add more description and dialogue :) great so far though.

July 30th, 2012 at 12:05am