Not Everything Goes Your Way - Comments

Sequel pllleeeasssseee

Omg the ending was perfect. Sequel please c:

i love it !!!! and can't wait for the rest.I think you did a really fantastic story as well :)

I am so sad she had a cord knot. That happen to two of my friends within 2 months of each other. It was the hardest thing to accept. The story was amazing.

I really like this so far, excited to see where it goes! I think she needs to tell him shes pregnant soon and i hope he takes it well because they are so cute! To improve, I would say to maybe add more description and dialogue :) great so far though.