Such Lost Creatures - Comments

I love this! <3

Well first of all I have to try to stop myself gushing over the beautiful banner and the lovely layout <3 Perfect combination!

I also love the summary, it explains just enough to let the reader know the tone of the story, but doesn't give away anything that will be essential to the plot. Like the name of the mystery man.

Since she had started school at Kennedy Elementary School over a month ago, Kallie had been in four different fights. More had accumulated since the start of her second grade year.
She's a scrappy little kid!

Anyway, so many emotions just from reading the prologue! Kallie is a ridiculously strong kid, I guess it's because she's had to face so much rejection in her short life?
I'm excited for this! you should update it asap. I want to know how she fits in to Tristan and Celia's family.

Hmm, this is very interesting! I thought the beginning was heartbreaking. It seems like everyone is giving up on Kallie, that can't really be good for the whole self-esteem thing. And the ending was intriguing. I'm wondering what their plans are for her, and why it's so important that they get her in particular. I'm subscribing, please update again soon! :D

I love this story!!!

Okay first off I need to point this out...
"Well it's not my fault! That jerk Colton was trying to steal Jackson's book fair money! He shoved him into the swing set and---"
I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE!

okay the actual comment here I come...
Kallie, seriously, I am so excited to see that you are writing again. I honestly love it! I love the characters and the beginnings of the plot. Kallie is one strong character so far and I can't wait to see how she progresses through this story! And the idea of her becoming a werewolf by the pack's decision is WONDERFUL since normally werewolf stories the character just randomly gets bitten you know. I love how different your story is.

I cannot wait to read more! I love it already! And I am so glad that I had a hand in helping you get back into writing! <33
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I have never seen your writing before. And... wow. I love it! And I've been wanting to read more original werewolf stories, so.. this is just perfect. As you can see, I've already recommended, and I've subscribed!

I like Kallie as a character already, I like how you made her know what was right and what was wrong at such a young age, and fighting for those who can't fight for themselves. I admire that a lot. Especially in a child. It's awesome.

Well :O I am excited! This concept is lovely. I like the idea of being adopted into the werewolf world. So many people just drop them in and vwala! I'm excited :D

Kallie is very strong willed at such a young age she's going to be a rather opinionated teen I have a feeling.

Kalliemonster! I'm excited to read more! Great start! I miss your writing! Glad you decided to get back into the swing of things. Even if Ray needed to give you a little boost. :) <eee