Uh thanks, but I think I am going to keep writing the way I do. I have people who already love the story that way it is, but thanks for the advice.
August 7th, 2012 at 10:36pm
Hey, I just took a look at your story and I want to give you some advice.
Avoid cliches.
They are those familiar situations, characters and story plots.
Bring your writing away from that and go towards more original thought.
Also, editing details are key, go forth and unlock them.