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  • Thatmom

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    Love this now on to the sequel!!
    June 20th, 2013 at 03:12pm
  • ruleyourlife

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    sooo cute. cant wait to read more. update soon. great job. loveee
    April 5th, 2013 at 02:32am
  • missann10

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    That was so cute! Love it and I hope you make a sequel or one shot!
    September 15th, 2012 at 09:25pm
  • SeriousToews

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    That was so adorable!! I really love this but you can't just leave it there. Maybe a few chapters into their life after Emma was born would be great. :)
    September 15th, 2012 at 06:50pm
  • nomountainhighenough

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    That was sooooo cute! You can't just end it there, we need to see their lives together so just pick up where you left off in a sequel lol. Only one bit of criticism.... It felt like you were rushing a bit here. Just slow down and show some detail. But it was still amazing!
    September 15th, 2012 at 06:15pm
  • samlo

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    Only two chapters? I'm demanding a sequel! ;) I need to know how the rest of the family took the news I not only the divorce but Jordy becoming a daddy.
    September 15th, 2012 at 05:24pm
  • nikijamiie

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    It was worth the wait you should defently make a sequal about how everyone in his family took the news and how they are doing and if they get married, i would love to read the rest of the story.
    September 15th, 2012 at 04:20pm
  • MusicLover525

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    Aww!! This is way too cute! I'm so glad that Jordan left Heather to be with his real love and his daughter! <3 hopefully you will do a sequel! I would love to know he reaction of he family and friends! :D
    September 15th, 2012 at 07:46am
  • dallasstar28

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    I love this!
    September 15th, 2012 at 06:54am
  • zackyvravageme

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    Holy crap! Please update soon, you got me hooked :)
    August 21st, 2012 at 04:39am
  • nikijamiie

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    When is the next up date coming?
    August 13th, 2012 at 04:45am
  • do you feel?

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    I am so excited for this story haha please for the love of Jordan Staal, update soon! :)
    August 4th, 2012 at 02:16pm
  • missann10

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    please continue this!!! love it :)
    August 4th, 2012 at 07:30am
  • fangirl1999

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    Very interesting so far. Please continue! Curious to see how it all works out, and why he married Heather.
    August 1st, 2012 at 02:10am
  • bublbabie

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    I think this definitely needs at least one more chapter
    July 31st, 2012 at 11:53pm
  • dallasstar28

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    Jordan deserves to be happy with Abby and the baby
    July 31st, 2012 at 09:06pm
  • Pensfan13

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    This is so good. Loved the first chapter! I can't wait for more!
    July 31st, 2012 at 06:24pm
  • nikijamiie

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    LOVED the first chapter please update soon, can't wait to read more! and loved how long it was hope the others will be to :)
    July 31st, 2012 at 04:46pm
  • Marie91

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    OF COURSE IT'S HIS!!! Haaaa! Good frist chapter! I can't wait to see what comes next! I just wish you hadn't written Heather to be such a bitch - I'm sure Jordy wouldn't have married her if she was? Update soon, please!
    July 31st, 2012 at 08:34am