That was so adorable!! I really love this but you can't just leave it there. Maybe a few chapters into their life after Emma was born would be great. :)
That was sooooo cute! You can't just end it there, we need to see their lives together so just pick up where you left off in a sequel lol. Only one bit of criticism.... It felt like you were rushing a bit here. Just slow down and show some detail. But it was still amazing!
Only two chapters? I'm demanding a sequel! ;) I need to know how the rest of the family took the news I not only the divorce but Jordy becoming a daddy.
It was worth the wait you should defently make a sequal about how everyone in his family took the news and how they are doing and if they get married, i would love to read the rest of the story.
Aww!! This is way too cute! I'm so glad that Jordan left Heather to be with his real love and his daughter! <3 hopefully you will do a sequel! I would love to know he reaction of he family and friends! :D
OF COURSE IT'S HIS!!! Haaaa! Good frist chapter! I can't wait to see what comes next! I just wish you hadn't written Heather to be such a bitch - I'm sure Jordy wouldn't have married her if she was? Update soon, please!