Running From Nightmares - Comments

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Wow, your writing is so vivid and enthralling. I really felt like I was in the story trying to distinguish dreams from reality. Amazing job! I really think you should develop this into a story, I would definitely read it. My favorite chapter was Chapter Four, the way you ended it with the stylized lines felt like I was reading a poem. In fact, the whole collection feels very poetic. Amazing job again.

bhfreggbrekbfvrqw. I love this so, so much. Just, perfection. I'm a sucker for this genre to begin with, and you are just an amazing writer, wow.
The writing style is bliss, it's very emotional and personal in its own way with the detail so the reader can place themselves in the story, which is a huge plus.
As I've already stated, I'm in head over heels with this story. Just, god bless.

In chapter one, before you went out into the sunlight, was a reoccurring dream that I have almost weekly. Like, you described my dream word for word except it usually takes place in my elementary school, but yeah.

I have to say that I love this story and I hope that you pick it back up after the contest. You're so good at details; as I read it I felt like I was in each of the dreams, feeling the fear of being captured, the comfort of being "saved." I didn't pick up on any spelling or grammatical errors, the layout was very easy to read and the content well written. It was magnificent to say the least. I'm subscribing to this in hope that you do continue it and I'd like to wish you good luck in our contest.

I liked this, it was good and your writing style is amazing.

To be honest, I'm a sucker for this type of story, and I deeply enjoyed reading yours.

Though, I wish the chapters were longer so I don't have to go back to working so early.

Keep writing, you've got talent. :D

The updates, since my initial, comment are good. An air of mystery about them but described well enough to not confuse readers. Well done. It is becoming more and more intriguing.

Oh, my god, I love this. Subscribed. Continue please!

I like this so far. It is simple but straight forward, well described but not overly wordy.