I Remember - Comments

Damn, and now I'm still reading. It started off cute but now there's drama wow. Seriously this story really hooks you. I really never thought I'd ever say that I was enjoying a One Direction fanfiction but well, here I am. You really should keep writing, your style is very good at keeping the trader hooked as you don't focus on unnecessary details that distract from the plot. Very good!

I was brought here by comment swap, I'm not a one direction fan at all, but this is pretty good! I like that the dialogue keeps the story moving, and it's really damn cute.

Hi, I didn't read the whole thing only because I am not a fan of one direction but I thought your story was cute and I liked your writing style. I can see a lot of effort went into this because your grammar is quite meticulous as well as your layout. Keep writing x

I was sent here by comment swap, and I have to say I'm not a big fan of One Direction, but I appreciate that you have put a lot into writing this! I would have probably enjoyed this a lot more if I was a fan of the boys, but still it's a good attempt at a first fic on here, keep up the good work!

Please update?(:

I really like it! Can't wait for an update!!!

Aw :) tis is just soooo cute!!!! They are so cure :3

NO DRAMA ALL I WANT IS NIAM CUTENESS NO!
You can't tell me there's going to be drama because now they've finally figured things out, I need them to stay together forever and ever and a day.

kjladfkj They're so perfect together it hurts

i love this

Aw. They are fucking ADORABLE together. I ship them so hard. Haha. :)

:( your story makes me want to cry! It's so good and so mushylovelyamazingsad! I literally wait by the computer refreshing the page waiting for an update! Lol jk! But I seriously love this story and I cannot wait till the next update!

I really like your layout. It's neat and tidy. The font is a little too small for my liking. Paragraphs are good, no spelling mistakes or anything. So, I have to be honest. I friggan hate One Direction, I don't like their music at all. But as far as story writing goes this is pretty good. I wouldn't go out of my way to read this all the way through but you are a decent writer.

So, while reading this chapter I moved to a different corner in my room and found myself yelling at my laptop again. Niall can't do that to himself :--( That's not okay. a;lfkjal write more please!

This chapter was so cute and I was awwing throughout the whole thing, and then it got all tense and awkward and I was sitting in the corner of my room shouting "NIAM COME BACK" to my laptop for about 5 minutes.... "oops"

Hey hey! Sorry it took me little while to read, I've been multitasking. But I really love every thing about it so fa! Love love love. The story just everything. You should update soon :)

I love this story! The story line is so awesome. Thanks for writing!

Great updates! I'm really enjoying this story and I can't' wait to read more. I'm definitely interested to see what Liam's response is to Niall's question, because by Liam's thoughts you can tell how important Niall his to him, but I'm curious to see if he'll admit that out loud.

Also, now that you guys space out the paragraphs it is so much easier to read! Thank you for doing that. My eyesight is terrible, so even without my glasses reading it before was so difficult. Now it's easy and it's great.

Update soon!

First I gotta say, I love the layout.

Now with your story,
I'm not a fan of One Direction at all, but I got to say this story was very unique.
It's very nice to see one of theses that isn't cliche, your characters are very well developed that I forgot that they were from One Direction. I haven't found any spelling nor grammar issues, so that is a plus.

Keep up the good work.

I really, really like this story! The plot line is something unique to the One Direction fanfiction world, so it's refreshing to not read another cliche story. The character development is also really well done. I feel attached to both Liam and Niall already!

The only thing I would recommend is spacing out your paragraphs. So instead of it being like this:

*Paragraph*
*Paragraph*
*Paragraph*

It would be:

*Paragraph*

*Paragraph*

*Paragraph*

If you did that it would make it much easier to read. Other than that, everything is looking really well and I can't wait to read more!