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  • leahann

    leahann (100)

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    Thanks I'm trying to make it the best I can
    July 31st, 2012 at 07:04am
  • ButterGirl96

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    Not bad for your first story but make sure your writing is not blocked. Spread it out by separating where different people talk. Not a bad idea and I hope you stick with it.
    July 31st, 2012 at 07:02am
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