Dark Intent - Comments

Dear authors, I enjoyed reading this to the fullest. I will go and read the prequel too and I already subscribed. <3 This was one of the rare times that comment swap brought me to a beautiful story. This undiscovered gem of yours is simply a masterpiece in my eyes. I just loved everything about it. The only problem would be the grammar and spelling mistakes but nothing too major. Keep up the great work and don't you give up on writing this cause I wanna see it to the end. That's all from me so bye. ~Marian.

Dear authors, I enjoyed reading this to the fullest. I will go and read the prequel too and I already subscribed. <3 This was one of the rare times that comment swap brought me to a beautiful story. This undiscovered gem of yours is simply a masterpiece in my eyes. I just loved everything about it. The only problem would be the grammar and spelling mistakes but nothing too major. Keep up the great work and don't you give up on writing this cause I wanna see it to the end. That's all from me so bye. ~Marian.

Did not expect that one lol :)

Duh, duh, duuuuuuh... I think that I extremely dislike cortez in this story. I mean, was he brainwashed or something? Actually, that could be a possibility... o.O

Hm. I have a theory about why Cortez is acting so strangely. I think there's more to it than him just adopting his country's view of women.

But I have honestly no clue what's going on with this tree walker, or how Judith got poisoned. Or did the twig poison her? It didn't really say. But she hadn't eaten anything lately, unless she was poisoned in some other way than ingesting the poison through food.

Hm. This plot gets deeper and deeper and more complicated with each chapter. But that's what I love in a plot!

LOVED IT I can't wait to read more about this tree guy

...what just happened?

I want to live in this world! Dragons, purple beaches, magic, so many different exciting things! I just want to live there!

Awww, Leila and Sam are cute. I'm glad at least one of the marriages is going good. I'm glad that Judith has found a friend at the castle aside from her sister and Sam. Those two are always so busy, I'm sure it's nice for Judith to have someone else to go to if she needs to talk or just needs to get away.

Hm, this one has a much darker tone than the prequel I feel like.

Douchenugget! I giggled so hard at that part. Leila's so funny.

I liked Cortez in the prequel, but he's just pissing me off in this one. He's letting his family stifle Judith, and he's even joining in on it! Stifling of individualism makes me angry. Very angry. He fell in love with Judith as she was in her own kingdom, not how his parents, especially his mother, is making her to be!

I'm so angry right now! But not at you guys! At myself! Because I thought I subscribed to this story, but I didn't! So I've been missing all of these updates. ={ Good thing I saw this story on the Stories list, otherwise I would've gone on in blissful ignorance of this story being updated for the rest of time, probably.

But now I'm subscribed. So it's all good.

Anyway, I've only read the first two chapters. The two sisters seem happy, although Judith seems restless as a queen. But everyone makes sacrifices for love, and being queen is hers I suppose. But I can tell that Leila just can't get enough of being a Dragon Rider. Heck, it sounds like a lot of fun to me! And Phaedra sounds beautiful.

From Comment Swap~

What an interesting story you have here! I’ve never read anything like this before, but I absolutely love this. So far, Mo’s character happens to be my favorite. I have a weakness of comic reliefs in stories and he just shot to the top of my list right now, haha. He’s sooo cute! Anyways, I just love Leila’s character. She’s strong, but she’s totally fierce; I also find it awesome that she’s a Lady, yet she serves on the Royal Guard. I mean, how awesome would that experience be?! I’d sign up for that!

What I really, really like about this story is that you have older elements of Dragon Riders with jet fighters and pods and things like that. It totally adds a really cool element to this already wonderful story.

I’m loving what I’ve read so far; I’ll definitely sub and recc this, and I’ll come back and read more when I can. Great job so far! <3

Omg. update soon!

Hmm How is it that Cortez has no time for her, but has time for the 'wretched she-devil'? No excuse for hitting her either. None at all. I'm glad she left, kind of. I'm glad she left him as soon as it happened but disappointed she didn't seek her sister out for help. She can't just do everything by herself, well she can, but it's better to have some support with you. And I really want to know what's up with that twig, as well as what Leila will do when she finds out about what happened.

omg....I'M LIKE IN LOVE WITH LEILA! update soon <3

LOVE IT! haha Leila is amazing!
Dear Cortez, time to tell your parents to kindly back off
Anyways, do we get to see more Sam in the next chapter, I miss that man.

I mean Judith lol

I hope Cortez's parents don't drive Rose and him apart.

I love the way this story is like a fairy tale but still had some modern touches. :)

First chapter and there's already trouble, I'm so excited for this!

Oooh, sounds really interesting!

I'm glad it's centered on Judith and Leila, they were my favorite sisters! Although, I wouldn't mind cameos from some of the sisters. Just not Priscilla. She's annoying.

Anyway, can't wait to read this one! I'm sure it will be just as awesome as the first!