Secretly - Comments

I am glad that they didnt sleep together - it would be bad form on both their parts. I am glad "cooler heads prevailed"! I was pretty sure it was a dream.

And it is pretty obvious that Kaner is slamming Jon to Julie - he wants Jon to look bad in her eyes because it is pretty obvious that there is chemistry between Julie and Jon.

But for Kaner to break up with her in the middle of Ohare....that's just a dink think to do. I think even a text may have been better than that!

It will be interesting how Jon and Julie both react to this development!

WHAT!? Just like that he broke up with her!!! WHAT!?

Oh no - was she still drunk? I thought they had sobered up. Sex with a drunk girl is not good form.

Or was it all a dream?

If it wasnt a dream, I hope Jon lives on the top floor of a tall building. It would be kinda embarrassing for the neighbours to see him and Julie laying naked on his deck!

And they will both have some explaining to do to Patrick!!

Love your writing, and so happy to see another update!

Yea Jon!

Ok, you cant stop here - please say you are updating again tonight!!

Let's hope Jon takes advantage of his second chance. Great updates. Love the flow of this story.

Jon, camping and s'mores.....almost too much sweetness for me.

But it is the alcohol that is the troublesome one....takes away all those inhibitions and you do irresponsible things you wouldnt normally do.

Like kiss your best friend's girl like there is no tomorrow!!!

I was a little confused when I got the update notice last night- I thought I messed up on reading the updates in the wrong order. But it must have been that you added Chapter 6.

Think I have things figured out now.

And by the way, I agree with Jule, RGlll can really throw a ball!

It appears Julie is conflicted! Great updates!

I completely missed a chapter when I was uploading this story (chapter 6) but it's fine, it doesn't effect the story much! So sorry!

I am guessing that Julie is misjudging Jon - the reason he is sullen and avoids her, and that he is hooking up with booby blonde bimbos is that he is trying to suppress his desire to be with her. I am sure he would like nothing more than to take her in his arms and really hug her, but he cant. She belongs to someone else - and that someone else is his friend and teammate - a BIG NO NO!!

But seeing as Julie is harbouring secret desires for Jon, it will be interesting when they are thrown together - alone. And Kaner has asked Jon to "take care of" Julie.

I bet he will!!!

omg karaoke and s'mores man that sounds like a super awesome night! cant wait for that :)

Yes it seems that Jon has a thing for her - and I am betting that she has a thing for him too. I mean, who wouldnt.

But whether he would break the Bro Code...dont know about that one....only maybe if Kaner cheated first.

haha i loved it and i don't care if the next chapter's lengthier because i am absolutely looking forward to more!! :D

Now that is the way to break up with someone - hanging onto a hunky hockey player! Way to go, Julie.

i love it and you should definitely continue this story until you have come to a successful ending! but until then keep updating because i want to be informed :) <3

This is great - please don't think that the lack of comments mean that no-one is reading (and enjoying) it!