Hell Above - Comments

this is way too cute for its own good

This was really good! I like your writing style and how descriptive you are. The ending left me wanting more, but I'll just imagine that everything worked out for those two since I'm a sucker for happy endings. Good luck in the contest!

I absolutely loved this. First, the layout was very pretty. It was super simple but I loved it and it enhanced the story. You are an extremely detailed writer. I could picture Vic and Marie so vividly, all thanks to your incredible ability to describe. Vic and Marie were developed so well and I adore that the story wasn't necessarily a "love" story. You really used the song as inspiration and I loved every second. I especially liked Marie's character and by the end I wanted to know more of her story. Thank you for this entry, it was splendid to read! (:

That was so adorable!