Paradise - Comments

Ugh this is so lovely Im squealing internally. Everything is beautiful: the layout, the character names, the character pictures (the gif you used for Heidi with the cat on her head killed me), and the description in the story is just phenomenal. Water and dirt was so perfect.

ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL

I can not tell you enough how much I love how trippy and different your stories are to me. I read them and so many thoughts flood my head at the same time and then I kind of realize i'm thinking all of this stuff just because you wrote a story with maybe a word count less than 300 word. That is breathtaking and i'm so inspired because who doesn't want to just make their readers think?

I love the metaphor in this, Heidi was water. I think it's a really good way to describe her and the way you did just made the story's ending (if you're going to end it there) so much easier to understand. I don't know, it was just great.

(im catching up on your stories rn so expect lots of comments from me hehe)

im reading this whilst listening to below my feet yup yup and the two really go together and im crying because this is so great and i wish i could write like you its like under 300 words and im still just like goddamn wow

i'm pretty sure i already know where this story is headed but i can't wait for another update. you're an exemplary writer, my friend.

tears tears
TEARS FOR THE LOVELINESS THAT IS THIS STORY~

you're updating this again
REALLY
OH MY GOD YES YES YES YES
YES.

wat where'd the chapters go THERE WERE LIKE FIVE :O ~cries~

Wonderful, thanks for the update (:

wow wow so good man i cant handle it and just how you wrote it with the "before, during, and after" kind of style i love it

ANTS YOU FUCK

heheh

and what kennedy said

heh heh dream boy lula is this another diary entry type thing im getting that vibe its you and its perfect and im loving every line of it and im reading it twice and thrice and letting the words sink into my brain and wondering how you manage to make these sentences so wonderful and perfect and just extremely in awe

v. what boyking said.

Oh god, this is so beautiful! I just love the way it's all written, the words, even the briefness!

i dont even know what to say, a lousy comment from me cant explain well enough how great this is already

Amazing, thanks for the update!

hey dood
this is gonna be good

perfection. there is nothing else i can say, your writing is stunning!

can i just get an amen please jesus where do i sTART i love the water thing and the whole thing and wow i am in awe

the reason i know i like your style is because, the first time i heard angels i listened to it all day, and the first time i found your page, i read everything you put up and everything you recommended. and i'm content in knowing that i can continue reading what you write. thank you

ya haven't even started yet and wow im sooooo stoked ^_^ can we just take a moment to appreciate that your layout is so good help me with my layouts bc yours are so perfect just teach me and wow who is that girl pls tell me she is beautiful self esteem has dropped a miraculous amount jesus christ he's so beautiful i am crYING yay im excited :')