@ H. Quinzel I'm so sorry. Believe me writing this chapter wasn't easy and I fought with killing her...part of me wants to just resurrect her in a sequel or something
I'm up to date on this now and can't wait to find out what'll happen next. I hope she can get back to Zacky before Michael can harm her or the baby. Please update again soon. xxx
Sometimes I wonder what the great Comment Swap fates are thinking. I'm in love with A7x and right before this fic, I was given a MCR fic. As much as your writing style captivates me and as much as I love the band, I unfortunately don't know the band well enough to connect with them on a fan-fiction level. The story was great if I allowed myself to forget that Zacky is a part of A7x. Not saying there's anything wrong with your story! On the contrary, I really really did enjoy it! I'm just super picky about fan-fics, and I just find myself having a hard time with fics about this particular band. With that out of the way, how about I actually tell you about your amazing story? I loved the plot and the character development!! I really found myself falling for the main character because I could easily relate! That's a crucial bit to character base. Wonderful job! Okay, I'm going to stop rambling before I get too into it. All in all, great job! I'm sorry that I wasn't able to put my whole heart and soul into reading this, but I can still say with great certainty that you are a very talented writer and I hope to see some more of your stuff in the future!
Helllooo. I've come here via comment swap. I've got to say, I love A7X fanfic so I may be a little biased in saying this, but I love your story. It's so perfect. So is the Rev, ohmygod. It makes me both happy and sad to read this, but I can't stop. This story is seriously addicting. Everything is flawless. I didn't see any grammar errors or anything like that, so kudos. I really love this. Keep up the good work and good luck with the rest!