October 19th, 2013 at 03:09am
I thought this story was really good. I loved her thought process and it was a really good concept. I liked how she kind of kept switching between hating the kid and then loving him. The story is to the point but it's really interesting.
I like the part where she's killing the guy. She seems to enjoy it until he screams because it reminds her of her son. He screams and she gets angry so she stabs him until he stops. I love the part. I feel like she kind of loses it a little.
The ending was good too. It reminded me of the Joker, how now she's always smiling.
I really like how well you expression the characters emotions but I really don't get a since of who she is, it's like she doesn't really have an identity and maybe that's better for the story, like she's lost it and now she's just this caretaker to this screaming monster. I also wonder if her son is autistic.
Course then there are all the questions of "UM HELLO AREN'T YOU GONNA GO TO JAIL?"
Really good story, very captivating.