Gosh you are seriously just growing as w writer. Your grammar and sentencing is amazing, you really take your time to make the story grammatically correct instead of just throwing a story out there
Oh. My. God. I just read this entire story in one day. I'M IN LOVE, I'M IN LOVE AND I DONT CARE WHO KNOWS IT! SERIOUSLY I didn't think I was a huge godric fan until reading this story and.its not even godric its just the way you write. Your amazing and I hope you update frequently cuz idk how long I can wait for this. I was so sad when I got to the last chapter
Wow shit did just hit the fan. Omg I can't wait to see the dramatic outcome of K finding out! And omg I just realized something! "K", her name is like a representation of "K"ey! That is so clever! Oh and I'm glad that it was Pam with her instead of Sookie. Sookie would just be like "omg wow" but Pam's all cool like "oh, it's you"
I love Nora in this! I cracked up so bad when she tried to piss Tay off. Omg. It is so amusing. But hot damn, I wonder how K will react when she finds out that she is the key. Shit just got serious! I am so happy about the family reunion, just thought you'd like to know.
Plus, gotta give u absolute credit for developing this Harmony character. She is so interesting and quirky. I want her to die for torturing people but at the same time, I love her character too much for her to die. Well thank u for the multiple updates, appreciate it very much!
I love this! The story line is so intriguing. The characters interaction is so kickass especially from sassy K and Godric. And I also think that u incorporated most of the characters on the show very well. Great job and I love the addition mythology stuff you've include into this story! It makes the story so interesting and not predictable as things would be if you mainly stuck with what is in the show. Keep writing, I look forward to seeing what happens to poor Godric. I'm also excite to see Nora!