Ordinary Boy - Comments

plz can u do another chapter it is so damn good plz again do another one?

Aw, that letter.

ah just so perfect!

"They can hurt you, i WONT LET THEM!" he screamed. omg this is too cute.

"Jesus Christ, of course. WHY DOES EVERYONE FUCKING THINK IM A WHORE! IM NOT!" Harry shouted face getting red.....i think this too...

ugh stop making my insides turn to mush

"They can hurt you, i WONT LET THEM!" he screamed. omg this is too cute.

"Jesus Christ, of course. WHY DOES EVERYONE FUCKING THINK IM A WHORE! IM NOT!" Harry shouted face getting red.....i think this too...

ugh stop making my insides turn to mush

@ eatmewhileimbri
do itt.

should i live comment???

I smiled the whole time I read your story. SO FREAKIN ADORABLE. I sure can't wait to see what's next ;)

no but really i love this (i can't say that enough) and dear lord ziam??? you are trying to kill me

no but really i love this (i can't say that enough) and dear lord ziam??? you are trying to kill me

i hate you for making me feel this way....

just. so. perfect.

the best way to pass time at my brother's soccer practice. No but oh my god. This was too much for me. I was giggling like an idiot. I could write paragraphs on the smallest details and why I love them. Lord I love louis as peter pan. And YES! Liam is prince eric!!!

Amazing as usual. :)

Oh my god. Oh my god. OH. MY. GOD. I love this, it's awesome. I didn't want it to end. Come on, girl. You've got to give me more.

I loved this. I can just imagine louis as peter pan. Keep up the good work.

*does happy dance* well this was too cute. I love this way too much. And Niall and the application and ugh.

Haha i am completely in love with this story ide.. I hope you do more.. cause i am smiling super big because of this story

I'm having some sort of weird beakdown. I love this so much because I have this love for Peter and for Louis. And you just combined them and ugh. (lol I just pictured Lou in green tights you are welcome)