I absolutely loved chapter 19!!! finally they kissed! now I'm just curious as to where their relationship goes from here.. can't wait for the next update!
First, I like the title of the story, and your style of writing. The layout (although it doesn't add to the story) is simple which is a plus because it makes the text easy to read. I love, love, love the immediate tension between Draco and Alexa. Speaking of, Alexa's got a fiery nature which (I'm only on "Malfoy Manor" at the moment) I'm guessing is going to get her into some deep poo pretty soon - which makes for good entertainment :) Keep up the great work, and I'm recc-ing this (:
Oh. I love you. And I feel bad for not commenting until now, but I absolutely adore everything you write, and I'm very glad you haven't downplayed the complexity of Alexa's feelings, because tht wast chief concern starting this story. Great job!!
Alexa is just so cute. I really love her! I like how you didn’t start the story off at the beginning, with the travel to Hogwarts and everyone getting sorted into their houses. It made your story really unique and a lot better paced, especially since I usually tend to skip over any part where people are getting sorted. I like how you went straight into the action and to the vacation! I think it’s funny how mean Draco is sometimes. It is very true to his personality for him to act that way. Overall, I think your story is really great and I really hope you keep writing it!
Here from comment swap: I'm not really into Harry potter, but this is good. I admit at the beginning my sister (who was reading it with me) said that the story would probably be very predictable, but it seems when you get past the first few chapters it gets better :) good work
This is a very good story. Comment swap brought me here, and I was delighted as soon as I saw that it was a Harry Potter fanfic. I loveeeee them. All I have to say about this story is keep going! I quite enjoy it, and will definitely read some more of it.
Another comment swapper here. To be honest, when this story popped up I expected a GreenDay fanfiction because of the title and their song "Wake Me Up When September Ends". Maybe that was your point? LoL Anyway, I was quite surprised to find a Harry Potter ff but its cool as I am a big movie fan of it(: I think the idea itis quite original and interesting.Alexa is quite the character now isn't she? Haha, well anyway good job so far, especially for a first story!(;, and keep it going!!
Oh, yay! Another post today! Just as I was about to sleep. d: Haha, I absolutely love your story. Your writing skills are just great and every time I read a chapter, I get sucked in. For this being your first story on this site, you are doing exceptionally well. I can't wait for your next update. (:
Comment swap has brought me upon your wonderful story. Oh my do I love me my Malfoy fanfictions. Hehe. I really enjoyed the bit of your first chapter I read but due to the short amount of time I have, I sadly did not get to read all of it or any of the other chapters. Excuse me deary. Still, it was very enjoyable just some grammar mistakes here and there. Otherwise, amazing. Keep it up sweetie. -NatalieDeJayy<&3