Imperfect. - Comments

Thank you so much, it means so much to me that somebody actually enjoys my writing, I'll be making my chapter two longer than the first chapter because I was disappointed with the length of it. Thank you for reading! xX

Hello there. :) Well, let's get started, shall we? :D Great job, I'm amazed. I loved the prologue and the first chapter. The only thing I have to say is that you have to make the first chapter longer. It was a great start and I really wanna read more. Even though your chapter was short, it pulled me in. Well done! XD Keep up the great work and share your beautiful and interesting imagination with me and your fans. :)