Love it, Vanessa has a bite in her bark I like it a lot, Brian watch ur fucking attitude I'm surprised tht Heather didn't pull ur ears and drag u back to the car and scowl u for being an asshole to Vanessa, I'm glad tht Heather, Zacky and Matt were nice to Vanessa I mean she is new to the state soo make her feel welcome and not call her mother a whore or call her a spoiled brat, cough Brian cough, I hope tht Vanessa enjoys her time and keep an open mind and just get to kno papa gates and everyone else except for Brian cuz he is being a spoiled ass brat or being a daddy's boy, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
Brian Brian Brian, u r such a whiny baby get over it yes ur dad has a child after u but don't point ur anger at the daughter ok she has done nothing to u at all but be born with no knowledge tht she has a father or a brother soo grow the hell up and lose the attitude before ur girlfriend gives u the worse silent treatment of ur life, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
Love it, wow Vanessa's boyfriend is an asshole like seriously u r goin to break up with ur girlfriend becuz she is leaving to California to stay with her dad and she could possibly come back within a month but u still want to break up with her still wow u r soo dumb, anyhoo love the first chapter I like how u go straight to the plot, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)