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  • miahaner

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    YOU ARE SUCH A TALENTED WRITER. I ENJOYED EVERY BIT OF THIS.
    October 26th, 2012 at 06:19pm
  • xxkilljoypresentsxx

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    Oh god !
    >.<
    this was so sexy ..
    September 4th, 2012 at 05:28am
  • bloodravyn

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    damn, just...wow!
    August 26th, 2012 at 08:10am
  • Synyster Gates;

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    I love this story!
    August 4th, 2012 at 02:29am
  • graveyard_ghost

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    Just wow...
    Aside from the smut, which of course was extremely hot *drool* , you managed to add so many elements than just sex. Very glad I stumbled over this, I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
    August 3rd, 2012 at 09:17pm
  • MoMo_92

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    A dirty talkin, drunk, horny, Brian is fucking hot as hell and imagining him having sex with me is better as ever tht sex scene was sooo hot tht I couldnt go to sleep yet omg tht was hot Lick
    August 3rd, 2012 at 11:51am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    OK....HOLY HELL!! that was....WOW! I absolutely loved the drunken, dirty talk of Mr.Haner....so friggin sexy, i think any woman would gladly let him be the Master of their P*ssy! ha. This has got to be one of, if not the best smutty short I have ever read on here! Cudo's lady, it was fucking awesome:D
    August 3rd, 2012 at 06:50am
  • pawnsinplay

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    PS...

    LOVE YOUR GUTS SOPHIE!
    August 3rd, 2012 at 06:32am
  • pawnsinplay

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    LOVE YOUR GUTS SOPHIE!
    August 3rd, 2012 at 06:32am
  • pawnsinplay

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    You already know how I feel about this, but let me take the time to tell you again how much I effing LOVE THIS. I love it. It's hilarious and sweet and HOT HOT HOT. Like...insanely hot. Probably one of my favorite oneshots, out of all the ones you've written (and no, I'm not just saying that because this was for me and I'm biased, I'm saying that because it's the darn truth, believe that) and I'll be reading it over and over. And over. STARTING NOW. <3
    August 3rd, 2012 at 06:32am
  • Synful Shadows

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    Again, drunk Brian is just too funny. XD I laughed so hard at that and when he mentioned taking Viagra. Just the thought of him taking that is the funniest thing to me. And hot damn, that was some amazing smut. I'm going to be reading this over and over again for a long time. Amazing job! :D
    August 3rd, 2012 at 06:31am
  • Golden

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    one of my most favorite two shot stories ever <33
    August 3rd, 2012 at 06:26am
  • shelby dawn

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    love it <3
    August 3rd, 2012 at 06:12am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Lol I can't believe that Brian told the officer that it was Lindsay idea to have sex in the park.
    As for the rest of the chapter that was hot!!!!
    A drunken brain sure has a lot for stamina to keep on going even if he had a little help from Viagra lol. Amazing chapter. I think my ovaries sure had a ride with this chapter.
    August 3rd, 2012 at 06:11am
  • CharmedLuna

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    This will definitely be on my top list to read when I'm bored. It's so hot! awesome work sophie ;0
    August 3rd, 2012 at 05:33am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Lol a drunken Brian sure is handsy and horny. I love it. I can't wait forthe next part :)
    August 2nd, 2012 at 04:41pm
  • literallyfuckoff

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    SYN GATES WASTED > WHITE GIRL WASTED

    lmao! i'm absolutely loving this so far, but dude, CLIFFHANGERS?!? #boo ♥ but you're lovely for posting this and i CAN'T WAIT for part 2! :D
    August 2nd, 2012 at 02:48pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Omg this is hilarious a drunk horny Brian how much sexier can it get omg Happy face he is soo handsy i love it and on top of tht him and Lydnesy r goin to get in big ass trouble by the cops becuz of Brian's horny ass lol I hope Brian knows how to shut the hell up when he is in front of the cops cuz if not then they r screwed, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    August 2nd, 2012 at 06:42am
  • littlepinkfox

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    Too funny! I'm excited for more mama. Can't wait :D
    August 2nd, 2012 at 06:33am
  • Golden

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    Drun brian is one of the sexiest thngs ever. I can't wait for the second half.
    August 2nd, 2012 at 06:08am