Just wow... Aside from the smut, which of course was extremely hot *drool* , you managed to add so many elements than just sex. Very glad I stumbled over this, I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
A dirty talkin, drunk, horny, Brian is fucking hot as hell and imagining him having sex with me is better as ever tht sex scene was sooo hot tht I couldnt go to sleep yet omg tht was hot
OK....HOLY HELL!! that was....WOW! I absolutely loved the drunken, dirty talk of Mr.Haner....so friggin sexy, i think any woman would gladly let him be the Master of their P*ssy! ha. This has got to be one of, if not the best smutty short I have ever read on here! Cudo's lady, it was fucking awesome:D
You already know how I feel about this, but let me take the time to tell you again how much I effing LOVE THIS. I love it. It's hilarious and sweet and HOT HOT HOT. Like...insanely hot. Probably one of my favorite oneshots, out of all the ones you've written (and no, I'm not just saying that because this was for me and I'm biased, I'm saying that because it's the darn truth, believe that) and I'll be reading it over and over. And over. STARTING NOW. <3
Again, drunk Brian is just too funny. XD I laughed so hard at that and when he mentioned taking Viagra. Just the thought of him taking that is the funniest thing to me. And hot damn, that was some amazing smut. I'm going to be reading this over and over again for a long time. Amazing job! :D
Lol I can't believe that Brian told the officer that it was Lindsay idea to have sex in the park. As for the rest of the chapter that was hot!!!! A drunken brain sure has a lot for stamina to keep on going even if he had a little help from Viagra lol. Amazing chapter. I think my ovaries sure had a ride with this chapter.
Omg this is hilarious a drunk horny Brian how much sexier can it get omg he is soo handsy i love it and on top of tht him and Lydnesy r goin to get in big ass trouble by the cops becuz of Brian's horny ass lol I hope Brian knows how to shut the hell up when he is in front of the cops cuz if not then they r screwed, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)