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  • KaylahJ KAM

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    @ Snow.White.Queen.
    Oh my gosh thank you so much! I've been trying to update it but I never have time. I'm so happy you like it Very Happy
    July 26th, 2013 at 09:24pm
  • Snow.White.Queen.

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    Here from Le comment swap, and I can safely say I've never been happier with a story I got from comment swap! I loved this. Like seriously, you have an amazing story. The descriptions and use of language are really good, the plot is fantastic, and your writing style is easy to read with a good flow. What else can I say? Good job!
    July 26th, 2013 at 02:10pm
  • KaylahJ KAM

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    Oh my gosh thanks, as long as you commented(Justin Bieber voice xD). I get high off of comments, you increase my addiction lol
    November 19th, 2012 at 05:54am
  • Jordypye

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    :L I wrote like a whole paragraph saying how much I loved it :'( and it's gone. So I'll just say I love it <3 and keep up the good work :)
    November 19th, 2012 at 05:37am
  • KaylahJ KAM

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    @ Death the Angel
    That's perfectly alright ^.^.. thanks for the comment xD, you just made my night cus no ones commented in a while
    November 19th, 2012 at 05:19am
  • Jordypye

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    For some reason it cut half off my comment off so sorry for posting again >.>
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    Wow this story is really good, the layout is simple which is good compared to some people's i've read where the layout is confusing as fuck.
    November 19th, 2012 at 05:17am
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    November 19th, 2012 at 05:15am
  • KaylahJ KAM

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    @ MoMo_92
    Aha thanks and I know, I knew she'd be perfect for Alaina :)
    October 7th, 2012 at 12:16am
  • MoMo_92

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    Favorite line: Damn, I never woulda thought. Candice Rider jealous? The world is ending" love the story Candide has nothin to worry about know tht hoe Aliana if thts how u spell her name is a hoe and the person portraying her is annoying as hell so great combo, an annoying hoe, perfect anyhoo great update can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    October 7th, 2012 at 12:12am
  • Lunacy.Fringe.

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    Let me just start by saying....WHOA!
    I have never come across a story like this before.
    Of course, of course! I have read an A7x fanfic, but not one which revolved around a hermaphrodite.
    This is way cool.
    The only constructive criticism I have to offer is that you might want to look over your grammar ([whoever] and I..." instead of "me and [whoever]..."
    But, other than that, it was really good.
    :))
    August 31st, 2012 at 05:17am
  • restart-my-heart

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    I love how original this is! The entire concept is great!
    Ivan is a very believable character and so creative.
    I love how basic the layout is, everything is easy to read.
    Your spelling and grammar are good but there are minor errors here are there.
    Overall I love this story. I still can't get over how unique this is and you should defiantly be proud of such a great creation.
    August 30th, 2012 at 10:06pm
  • MoMo_92

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    My favorite line is " I love that I have a group of people whether it be family, friends, classmates, or fuck even the customers from Beach Music to support me and accept me for who I am. And I love Candice, Jared, Ace,Toni, my family, and you for not judging and sticking around through my drama and shitty situations." anyhoo I'm curious of y Candice frowned when Ivan asked if she wants to go on a double date with Randy and Toni...is is becuz she knows tht Toni still likes Ivan or is it tht she wants to spend alone time with Ivan? Can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    August 30th, 2012 at 06:29am
  • skatergurl2013

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    awesome story it must be weird having both male and female organs, but I wouldn't diss someone like that, I'd think it would be pretty cool hanging out
    August 29th, 2012 at 11:38pm
  • MoMo_92

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    I like this story, highly creative and I enjoy reading the first three chapters but what draw me in was the fact tht the main character is a hermy (I can't spell the real word to save my life) but yea tht got my attention, my favorite line(s) are "... second, they aren't hot... they're gorgeous" and " I respect those girls enough to define them as more than hot. They're women, not cheeseburgers." anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    August 28th, 2012 at 05:21am
  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    i have no idea why no one else has commented on this story. its amazing and absolutely unique:)
    i think you should just suprise us or me since im the only one that comments
    *Cough stupid people *cough
    anyways my favorite line was "i guess because i look up to him"
    it was really sweet.
    i think this story is super special and i cant wait fer an update
    so make sure you do or ima leave a very mean comment on your profile:)
    love ya and keep it up
    August 3rd, 2012 at 11:17am
  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    i deffinetly think you should continue this story.
    its really legit and i like it alot
    so update please? and ill comment as much as poosible:)
    August 2nd, 2012 at 09:31am