Comment swap! I didn't know it was a MCR story until I started reading it :P I thought you did a great job on those first chapters, while she was in the concert, and now I'm also curious to know who broke intro their house! Oh, and I just thought I should let you know that your paragraphs are not according to minha rules, even though I don't think that's a big problem. Keep up the good work! :)
Awesome!!!