Behind the Mask - Comments

  • Saul Hudson

    Saul Hudson (355)

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    Kayra, I love your layouts, I feel as though this has been mentioned before but seriously, loving your layout for this one, the banner is great and you somehow make those flowery backgrounds work, because I can't. They're always fantastic though. The only complaint is the title of the story is a little too dark, it's hard to read.

    Your summary is fantastic, as always, I really love your wording and the way your write your summaries, they're amazing at drawing people into your stories.

    Then the first chapter was wonderful, I really liked it, it's really well written, it's really easy to get drawn in, even when you don't know a damn thing about the bands involved (minus perhaps one of two) but I love the characters you create, within mere moments I always find myself caring about them and tied in with their emotions. They're always just really genuine characters and I consistently find myself rooting for. I'm subscribing for sure because I have no doubt in my mind that this will turn out to be nothing less then an amazing story as it is written by perhaps one of my favourite authors and great friends on the site.
    August 2nd, 2012 at 11:36pm