I find your story interesting. I think you should definitely keep going! Personally, I haven't found anything wrong with your story. However, your layout is a little messed up. The background picture won't show up. But I would like to see you proceed with many more chapters and lots more reading fun!
I find your story interesting. I think you should definitely keep going! Personally, I haven't found anything wrong with your story. However, your layout is a little messed up. The background picture won't show up. But I would like to see you proceed with many more chapters and lots more reading fun!
-K