Monsters ball - Comments

I haven't read all of it yet, but let me point out something thats bothering me.
*2nd paragraph - last sentence*
Shouldn't that be "And just like that, I was alone" not "And just like take I was alone"?

@ SweetlyBroken
thanks :) im on vacation and away from my laptop. I have to get back to Vegas to get more inspiration again X)

I like it so far. :) I grew up in Vegas so it's awesome getting to read a story set there. I'm thinking about writing one myself. I would suggest writing it in Word or something of that equivalent. There's something about a full keyboard, you know? I'm looking forward to the next bit. :)