Gone and Never Coming Back - Comments

This is a really good story I can't wait for you to update it

Please update Im losing it over here!

I'm so glad you updated, I've waited for so long for this! It was so good!! I can't wait for the next update. I hope Chris/Cameron gets to see Aaliyah soon and that he puts Jada/Jayden on blast!!! I'm not sure I like Aaliyah "being" Tyler, nor am I okay with her son being with him as well, considering he's the one that got the crew caught up and is on a mission to get Chris! This is getting good, I can't wait for the next update!

Updating soon my darlings!

I needed my fix for this story so I just re-read chapter 21, I can't wait for chapter 22!! No rush, just impatiently waiting for an update! :-)

I hope Chris Dnt go to jail. And he tell aaliyah everything . And she still wants to be with him. And he offs jada and he can let cayden know he is his daddy!" And bow is a little beyotch! They gonna get dat boy!

Noooo ! Chris Can't Go To Jail , & Aaliyah Need To Get Out Like Now ! Update Please

Awwwww I promise the update is coming soon, school has been rough and my computer is acting up :/

Update Please

I LOVE this story. The angle that you took with this is totally different than anything I've read, other than my bestie's LUCKY ME! Keep up the great work. I'm impatientely/patientely waiting for the next update!!!

Yo this was good. I enjoyed reading this. Continue the good work

GO HEAD MIJO!!! Shiiiiit yall got bb fucked up!! lmbooo!!!

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Helllooo, I'm here from comment swap.
Well, I've got to say, this story definitely has potential. Although, it's kind of hard to follow due to grammar/paragraph structure. Regardless, I do like the dialogue and characters. I do wish the chapters were a little bit longer, but that's alright too. I definitely think this is going somewhere and you should continue working on this. Keep it up and good luck with the rest.

-Jess xx

update sooon plzzzxxxxxz

OOOOOO!!! that jada is just a lying ass biatch!!! this shit right here nigga??? OMG! I love it!

Update Soon, Good StoryStory

@ MsQTPY
awww thankyou:))

I knew Isabella was the girl that Chris had slept with, the one that got him in the situation he's in. I just hope he can get back to Aaliyah, and PLEASE don't take Cayden away from her. I know I'd die if somebody tried to take my son Matthew from, he's my world, so I DEFINITELY know how Aaliyah is feeling right now. I can't wait for the next chptr. KEEP YOU THE GREAT WORK!!

@ MsQTPY
Lol doooo ya thang :)