Ugh, he is hurting my HEART! I know he's gonna do something bad, soon. I hope Paloma kicks his ass...and then they have to eventually make up of course! lol Hope you update SOON! :D
boy boy boy. better be good to paloma. i don't know what's going through his mind... but if he's screwing this up again, he's so fucked up. hh I didn't want to read on the story, but then it hit me; I HAVE TO. and I'm so glad i did it :D I'm waiting for another update
You should've called it "Liar Liar" but you know my opinion c: BUT I LOVE IT! and text me crazy woman! unless your phone is still out of commission but yeah c: i love you cara! that was amazing! :D And I missed Pal and Tone!
HOLY FUCKING SHIT YOU NEED TO UPDATE THIS THING RIGHT THE FUCK NOW!!! How .. just...why.. just..WHAT THE FUCK! some crazy shit is going on and I'm super into this story and I kinda need to know whats gonna happen with them!!!! DDDDD; I really love this!
I'm gonna kick his ASS!! Well...I would if that were possible. Lol This chapter was great, I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm probably gonna need a large box of tissues for the rest of the break-up scene, whenever that comes along! :( Really stoked you updated so soon. Honestly, I almost fell out of my freaking chair when I saw the notification! lol I Really REALLY RREEAALLYY hope the next chapter comes just as quickly!!!! :D
Did you know, a girl that used to go to my school was named Amber, and she sounds exactly like this character and she was a slut, and incredibly annoying so yeah, I don't like her. dO NOT PUT THAT IMAGE IN MY HEAD. IT'S BAD.
I am so conflicted oh my god. I love Tony, but god he'd stupid right now. He promised her that he would never leave again. He promised. And now this. Tony, are you stupid or something? You can't just leave Paloma now!
Amber needs to back the fuck off! and don't even get me started on Tony... you can only go soo far saying 'this is for Paloma' hmph. my heart is breaking </3 i'm totally with Drowningissurrealism..