I'm not counting this as one of the comments for placing third, I just really like this and want to comment on it. I never really comment on smut stories but I kind of love this one. I love Georgia, I really like her back-and-forth with John in the beginning. Not being impressed with him or being impressed but letting on that she is.
I didn't see any grammar or spelling errors. It was all really well written and I totally love the ending, it was so cute! Great job!
I didn't see any grammar or spelling errors. It was all really well written and I totally love the ending, it was so cute! Great job!