January 22nd, 2013 at 05:30pm
Interesting in a good way. It's dark and mysterious and it fits the story well.Story content: I love the over all story content. The first paragraph gave me chills and goose bumps and I had those chills and goose bumps throughout the entire story.
Grammar/Spelling: The grammar and the spelling is perfect. I read through this smoothly and I didn't cringe. If grammar or spelling in a story is bad, I cringe. And I didn't do that here. Which is good. :)
Good job on the story. I'm going to recommend it.
Thank you :)