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  • holli.sullivan.sykes

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    I just now got to read the rest of the posted chapters; I have to tell you how awesome you are! I love the character you've built around Oliver. Comparing this to other Oliver Sykes stories I've read, he seems sweet and kind, but very opinionated. I also love how you incorporated Kean and Erica, as well. Haha

    I feel like something's sketchy with Oli right now though... Like why is he so skeptical to tell her why he's so into her? I'm confused, but I guess that's a good thing for a writer to hear sometimes! I can't wait for things to start pulling together.

    I cannot wait for the next chapter! Update as soon as possible, please!
    August 29th, 2012 at 09:02pm
  • viralstorm

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    OMG! I just read all of this in one sitting. I'm seriously mad it ended! Update already! Wink
    August 29th, 2012 at 08:05pm
  • holli.sullivan.sykes

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    Alright, I only got through chapter 1 right now--because I have to hurry off to lecture--but I'll read the rest when I get back! I just wanted to say that I'm absolutely intrigued by this story, and your writing is exquisite! Your word choices are just... Wow.

    Illicit is one of my favourite words ever (don't ask, I just like to say it; it sounds nice), and I was pretty excited when you wrote it. Lol I'm a complete loser, don't mind me.

    I'll comment again once I get a chance to read the rest of your chapters!
    August 29th, 2012 at 05:06pm
  • KylieJames

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    I think it's such an amazing story!! Waiting for more!
    August 25th, 2012 at 09:10pm
  • GetOnYourKneesBro

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    I think it's amazing in every way. You should definitely update!
    August 24th, 2012 at 03:41pm
  • dizzydreamer.

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    vvv I agree with her. It's PERFECT in every way. Please update!! I can't stop reading it and I just love your writing <3!
    August 24th, 2012 at 05:46am
  • brittanylol

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    Excuse me for this but this story does not suck! It is honestly perfect. You have the best writing. Pleaseeeee update ASAP. It makes my whole day better!
    August 24th, 2012 at 02:32am
  • daydreamz

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    It's moving along well, not too fast or too slow. I enjoy reading it!
    August 23rd, 2012 at 09:27pm
  • brittanylol

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    That was a very good chapter! Even though I liked it with josh, I must admit: Oli is so much better. Hahaha
    August 22nd, 2012 at 02:00am
  • GrimmOSauris

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    Just found this story, it's fucking awesome!
    Subscribed.
    August 20th, 2012 at 08:14pm
  • Askingxbmth

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    Love it keep going! ^.^
    August 15th, 2012 at 08:05am
  • dmbbmb123

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    yep its much better now, :) please update son
    August 14th, 2012 at 03:52pm
  • ChristyRawr

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    Very excited to see where this story goes.:) keep updating!
    August 13th, 2012 at 10:27pm
  • dmbbmb123

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    Hi I really like the story the plot and writing style is great :) I love the idea. But a small tipp you might want to add more spaces because otherwise it gets harder to read. O otherwise its great.
    August 13th, 2012 at 08:58pm