All I Want to Know Is If You're Alive - Comments

  • Bridgesmademyday

    Bridgesmademyday (150)

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    Wow, great start! I love how you incorporated Civil War history into the story.

    I can't wait until you update!
    April 10th, 2008 at 05:41am
  • x Alice Nine.

    x Alice Nine. (100)

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    More? O_O
    April 9th, 2008 at 09:25pm
  • tex1209

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    i like where you ended the first chapter, creates suspense. i was sure the mother was going to say that William is dead. nice work.
    April 7th, 2008 at 06:24am