Ecstasy - Comments

This story was very lyrical, and I loved the emotions you conveyed in the story. I don't really understand about the bold and then italics. I would love to make a layout for this, because how plain it is really does not do this story justice.

Anyway, good job. Loved the title, by the way. :)

Oh my God... u said that poetry is ur best but i cant believe it! this story isnt like sth i've read before!i've read stories with similar storylines, but this is different! it's not just a story.. it is poetry, it is music, it is real art..it's like a song, i d0nt know, it's perfect!! the way u combined each word with the other, the way u described the feelings is amazing! one of the best stories i've ever read! see, i'm so excited that i cant stop talking! X.x awesome job!!!<3

Wow. This made me cry. Your writing is beautiful. I felt her emotion just by the way you discribed it.
Truely beautiful.

toast in my eyes!:

that was excellent. phenomonal. touching.

you portrayed the emotions superbly.

... you still wanna help me out?
:]

Yeah, I'll still help you out if the site will allow it (Its saying your banned and that's the reason I didn't leave this on your page...)

that was excellent. phenomonal. touching.

you portrayed the emotions superbly.

... you still wanna help me out?
:]