This story was very lyrical, and I loved the emotions you conveyed in the story. I don't really understand about the bold and then italics. I would love to make a layout for this, because how plain it is really does not do this story justice.
Oh my God... u said that poetry is ur best but i cant believe it! this story isnt like sth i've read before!i've read stories with similar storylines, but this is different! it's not just a story.. it is poetry, it is music, it is real art..it's like a song, i d0nt know, it's perfect!! the way u combined each word with the other, the way u described the feelings is amazing! one of the best stories i've ever read! see, i'm so excited that i cant stop talking! X.x awesome job!!!<3
Anyway, good job. Loved the title, by the way. :)