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  • heyrayray

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    So...are you still writing this?
    October 17th, 2012 at 10:25pm
  • DaniGates

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    Aw, that was so cute. I loved it dear.
    September 30th, 2012 at 06:17am
  • bob morley

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    I can't even.

    This was amazing.

    There are no words.

    Fantastic entry.

    Good luck in the contest.
    September 29th, 2012 at 10:11pm
  • ray8788

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    Love it! Please update soon
    August 4th, 2012 at 05:12am
  • Chasing Cars

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    Oh my goodness. I love this
    August 3rd, 2012 at 06:07am
  • littlemisslonely

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    Hell* sorry for the spelling error.
    August 3rd, 2012 at 05:54am
  • littlemisslonely

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    Hell* sorry for the spelling error.
    August 3rd, 2012 at 05:54am
  • littlemisslonely

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    I thought it was a one-shot until I got to the author's note. Happy to find out it isn't, though it still be great if it was. Kinda excited to see how the helm this pans out. Haha. :)
    August 3rd, 2012 at 05:54am
  • burning.

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    I really liked this! Seriously, anything that has to do with Zayn Malik gets me hooked, so naturally I had to click on this. At first, when I saw the layout, I wasn't too sure about reading it — the background hurt my eyes a bit, to be honest.

    But then I actually got down to reading it, and... wow. The description of everything, the way you include the information in the plot, how you catch Zayn's personality... It was truly incredible. I couldn't stop reading.

    And then I got to the end, to see that his routine of leaving had been broken, and it made my heart warm, because seriously, if he was willing to stay and not leave like most people would do — it's already adding character development, and I loved it.

    <3
    August 3rd, 2012 at 05:43am
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