Iris - Comments

This story is so amazing. Please write more <3

This story is so amazingly written, it's different and unique compared to the other story's i've read.
You can feel how much this story means to you and the connection you incorperate into this story makes it so much more hauntingly beautiful! ugh.
I just cannot get enough of this story, its so wonderfully amazing. I am very much looking forward to any future updates.

This is so, so lovely. So heartwrenchingly beautiful, I love it. Seriously, the way you're speaking to him, and not to us, the way you connect the titles of the chapters to the actual chapter, it's wonderful. Comment swap sent me here, and since I loveI was very very pleased, and not dissapointed at all. The layout is so freaking amazing, I love it. Such a wonderful, wonderful story. Update soon!

You write so amazingly it's crazy. I honestly love your story so much and I can't wait for you to update more so I can read it. It's amazing really.

You write beautifully. this honestly made me tear up.

Aw, he's blind! That made me cry :( I can't even explain how perfect this story is and how much I love it <3

Oh my... I don't even know how to say what I feel. This story is so beautiful. Sad, for sure, and depressing (in a good way), but so amazing. It makes me feel good, in a way. I am so amazed at how well it is written, and how original the plot is. It's stunning, and I really can't wait for more. Honestly. And I am so, so sorry for your friend... My prayers go to him, I really hope he gets well soon. Fingers crossed. Keep up the - very - good work, please, and I shall patiently wait for the next chapter, hoping your friend will get better. xo

Hi! Well I have to say, this was a great gem of a story. It was a fantastic read. The way you incorporate the title of the chapter with the opening line. I also love all the discriptions and emotions you convey in this story. It is obvious that this story is very important to you. I truly hope your friend gets better :)

Comment swap! I love how you incorporate the chapter titles with the opening line of the story! I've never seen that before and I think it's totally original and awesome. I agree with the second comment below mine that the first chapter is a little but muggy but it's so beautifully written that it's easy to look past. I'm also very sorry about your friend and I hope that they get better soon. Keep writing, you're very good at it.

Comment swap xD

Your writing skill are awesome your plot is very unquie and that makes it interseting. i love sleeping with sirens they are amazing so Kellin being in it just makes it even more better :)

Keep up with the writing :D

Comment swap brought me here :)

First of all, this is a beautifully written piece of work. I must admit, I got a little lost in the beginning, but caught on as I read further. The way you portray your emotions in your writing, is haunting in the sense that I can feel myself being in the scene with the characters, but as an invisible entity.

I'm not familiar with Kellin Quinn nor Sleeping With Sirens, hence I googled it up for more info. Just wondering, is the story set in a dystopian world or something? Because I think Kellin is a sex-slave of sorts? Pardon me if I'm wrong.

Lastly, thoughts and prayers to your friend. I hope he'll be alright and he'll be up and about in no time, playing music again.

Keep writing.

Knowing the background behind this story just adds that much more emotion to it. You are a very talented writer. I could really feel the emotion behind your words. I am sending prayers for you and your friend your way. I hope that he will get better soon. I understand about music being so important to someone, so I hope that he will be able to play again someday.
Back to the story, again, very well written. No spelling or grammatical errors. Honestly the emotion behind it all was what really caught me. Just the way you write everything really hits hard and makes an impact. Maybe that's because of knowing why and who you're writing this story for. Good job and I hope that things turn up brighter for you and your friend <3

Well first off I'm very sorry about your friend. I don't know what happened, but I hope he gets better quick and is able to play the drums again...
Your story is magnificent. I thought it was going to be a regular story, but then you threw in the detail about him being a slave from the Red Light District and things got interesting. I'm thinking maybe a futuristic thing going on?
Anyway, it's really well written and I didn't see any major spelling errors. Good luck with this :)

that made me tear up a bit. it was so beautiful. i cant wait until the next chapter! <3

This is just so beautiful I want to crt, I was excited when I found this and the plot is so unique. Your writing skills are amazing and you put me to shame! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Keep writing and good luck

OHMYGOD. I am so happy comment swap brought me here. I freaking love Kellin Quinn, and this was just so beautifully written, I can't even. Anyways, I love this so far and I honestly can't wait to read more. I hope to see more of the rest of SWS also. And, I don't have one bad thing to say about this. It's so good. I'm fangirlin over here. Please update soon and good luck with the rest!

-Jess xx

This is beautiful so far, I am absolutely in love. Please update as soon as you can

Great update! I really liked it, update soon :)

This looks like a good story. Can't wait to see what happens. :)

This is the start of something amazing, I can tell. This was really great, I loved it! Please update soon :)