Blame It On the Rain - Comments

Dear author, I enjoyed reading this oneshot. I found it to be sweet and cute. I'm not a fan of the summary because it was the lyrics of a song and not your own writing but the lyrics fit the story nicely. You to edit it a bit because you have afew writing mistakes but nothing too major. Keep writing stories like this. ~Marian.

Dear author, I enjoyed reading this oneshot. I found it to be sweet and cute. I'm not a fan of the summary because it was the lyrics of a song and not your own writing but the lyrics fit the story nicely. You to edit it a bit because you have afew writing mistakes but nothing too major. Keep writing stories like this. ~Marian.

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The layout, it's really cute and I think I think that way mainly because it's simple and sweet.

I'm sure this is a band fan fiction, correct? I'm not fond of these at all so it was hard for me to keep up with it, but I can't begin to describe how vivid and lively this happens to be. Great job.

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Layout: Simple, cute, and clean, and easy to read even with the polka dot background and it actually compliments it.

Summary: Well it's not really a summary, but I'm assuming lyrics to a song and if the lyrics are representing what the story will be like then it's gonna be a beautiful story. I don't know that song, I know of Alesana, but not the song. Those lyrics are great though.

Story: From the description in the first paragraph I can tell you are a good writer, because it's details that really bring a story to life. The way you described her sitting and the male's voice was a perfect execution, not to much and not to little.

In the second paragraph, I am fairly certain like 99 percent sure that 're runs' is one word: reruns.

Max was the first serious relationship - to me I think this would sound a bit better as 'Max was her first serious relationship...' that might just be a personal thing with me, but I do think it would sound better.

the day the met vividly. - fairly certain you can see the forgotten letter in the second 'the'.

the connected and - forgot the 'y' again.

On band in particular - One band...

Mac didn’t hesitate to bring him in. I believe it was meant to be Max.

Bu then I got - But

Aside from a few forgotten letters, I believe that this story was very well written and had a deep emotional feel to it. A touching heart breaking story and I enjoyed reading it. I definitely did not see that happening, so it was a very good twist.

Great job with this!
=D

Wowzers! This is really well written it has just enough details to fill you in but not to much to bore you! AMAZING story :) Seriously I never ever ever ever cry while reading and I almost cried. Greattt story :) :) literally...great just great!! Talented you are! <3

But I couldn't help but cry towards the end there. :C

Ooh, I REALLY liked this. This was just perfect. <3