Touch - Comments

That last bit, with Mick and Tommy ....that freakin' killed me. I guess because it was a serious first time sex scene and I went from "awh boo" to envisioning Mick just chillin' there all "heh"

I desperately want to call this my favorite story you wrote but I can't because I love everything you write. It's not fair!

Before I begin, I love Motley Crue. I can't exactly name any songs off the top of my head - at least not without being able to hear them first, but still, I love their music, and this story...

Cathy, you really outdid yourself with story. I absolutely this story to pieces. I like the build up you had going on between Vince and Nikki leading up to the epic love scene. Everything was definitely realistic. And I loved it. Thank you for recommending this story to me. :)

Chapter Three
I know you said you broke up the longer piece into shorter segments, but I really wish it was one single story. I think I'd prefer not to be interrupted to go to the next chapter

Your descriptions are hothothot.

Chapter Two
Vince's legs were tangled in the sheets, their white color making his tan pop out more than usual. I really like this description. It's...visually pleasing Your wording could be revised but, eh. I get the point. I don't particularly enjoy it when there is pages of detail (some people may disagree with me, but whatever)

Nikki leaned forward some more, Vince's breath hitting him. Leaning down a bit more again and closing his eyes, he let his lips graze across Vince's slowly, slowly...

Chapter One
I looove the slow build-up in the beginning. It wasn't just "Nikki likes to touch Vince -- lets fuck" I hate fic where there's a two sentence explanation and then BAM smut. I'm really excited to read on.

Lol. Didn't want to effing know. Okay. Well, not much to say here..My shoulder still hurts?

Hollered is spelled with two e's.

OH hay today (Thursday 10/11/12) is National Coming Out Day. Just letting you know.

OH hay today (Thursday 10/11/12) is National Coming Out Day. Just letting you know.

HAHAHAHAHHAHAH slllllllaaaassshhhhh *Sir Didymus charge face*

Hmm. I'm not falling asleep, so you've definitely got that down. The next thing is sort of hypocritical. You need a little more detail, just not enough to bore someone to death.
Um another compliment...err, well the long chapter is really nice :) I hope I didn't disappoint. Okay, well thats it for the first chapter. I will do one chapter a day! Just gotta remember..

Wow that's was an interesting read. Very well written :)

Fucking amazing. I'm subscribing and recommending this shit! -A

Oh this is great I loved it:)

Okay I have only read the first two chapters so far, but I love this. I love you for doing a thing about Motley Crue which is one of my favorite bands:) Thank you for this:)