Abandon - Comments

This story is absolute perfection! I read the most recent chapter and went to see when this was last updated and nearly had a heart attack. There's not a lot of Derek Hale stories on here that I REALLY like, but this is definitely at the top of the list of the ones I love. I really hope to see an update in the near future!

aawe just read those 9 chapters you've got up and dammit I love this story! but the way chapter 9 ended.. gah! heheh.. and then I noticed that you updated this back in 2012 *pouts* did you stop updating because you lost interest in the story?
ya know i'd probably fall off my bed if this got an update in the future

This story is perfect! I love it so much. The relationship between Derek and Phoebe is adorable and sexy all at the same time. And it's all believable. You haven't distorted Derek into something unrecognizable. You've written him expertly and you morphed his relationship with Phoebe into something that I could really see happening.

Also, you're writing style is flawless. Literally, perfect. I can follow everything so easily because you write with such ease and grace.

Hope you update soon 'cause this story is definitely one of my favorites now.

cute cute cute! loved it so much! can't wait to read more! it was my first teen wolf story and it was perfect! xx

Can't wait to read more. (:

Oh my god. I just started reading this story an hour ago, but it is honestly so wonderful. Teen Wolf is definitely one of my favorite shows ever, and Derek is actually my favorite character. I adore the way you portray the characters in a way that the show doesn't, and your style of writing is great. I really cannot wait for the next update though! Ahh.

Update soon!

I seriously hope you update soon!!!! I haven't come across a Derek Hale story that has gotten his attitude right! But you got Derek spot on! please please update soon! I love it!

awesome story!! update soon :D

Please update this soon! I've re-read it so many times that I have dreams about it! Please? For your loyal and wanting readers?? ?

I love it. I see you haven't updated in awhile, huh?
Please, update soon, if you can.
:) I really wanna know what Derek says or does when he learns that he is Phoebe's mate. <3
I hope Phoebe is his mate too.. c:

OMG! I hope he is happy about him being her mate but I think the reason he is freaking out is because she is his mate too....i hope she is.....I can't wait ot read more! Update soon plz!!!! This is awesome!

Omg this story is amazing you need to please update it!!1 Im dying to know what derek says or how he reacts!!! :)

This is so amazing, there are seriously no words to describe it. Please, oh, please update!!

love this story :D

Please update. I love this.

I really like this story and wish you would continue. Please update!!!!!!! :)

You can't leave it off right there!! That's so cruel. Derek and her are so freaking cute together. I hope we get to see them be more playful with each other.

love this! the drama! the emotions! aahhhhhhhhh!!!!

Jealous Derek is freakig adorable! I love you! And I love this! Please update soon!