Fact and Fate - Comments

I loved this. I love John Oh, and although I'm not a big fan of Austin Gibbs, I really like this story! Lilly is trippin, she knows that John is sexy, who doesn't? I mean come on! Anyhoo, I thought this was awesomely cute!

Okay, comment swap sent me to this story. I will admit that I haven't the slightest clue as to who these people are, so this story confused me. I read it anyway,and it was well-written. Take away the plot, you still have an amazing structure for the story.

Okay, that was so unbelievably cute. I want to punch myself in the face that was so cute. I assumed John would sweep her off her feet and Austin would find out. Even though it was predictable, I was in love with it. Good work :)

I really like this story. I'm just finding out about this amazing piece of work from comment swap, and this is a pretty good story, if not, great. I'd suggest you keep on going with this story and expand it more, for people to enjoy. More than they already are, of course!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!