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  • yang yoseob.

    yang yoseob. (100)

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    CS: This story is extremely, extremely blunt. Though, it is in first person and so I understand but - be careful because being too straightforward in your writing can be boring for readers! But other than that, this story seems cute; Kai's really bubbly and stuff c:

    Just putting this out there - Kai from EXO?
    IGNORE IF YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND ;____;
    Other than that, good luck with this story C:
    August 6th, 2012 at 06:12am
  • Lady.V.

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    Hello there. :) I was brought here by comment swap and I have to say I'm really glad I did. I like how you kept writing what was in Willow's mind. I wonder how Willow's and Kai's characters will develop. Your descriptions was very well written and they didn't made me bored at all. Just great! Keep up the great work. XD
    August 4th, 2012 at 07:28pm
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