I'm so excited that this has been started. I don't like that Loki is ignoring Eva. I hope things change soon cause they just need to be together. I also like that the Warriors Three are going to teach her how to fight. That sounds like it might be interesting.
Yay for the first chapter of the sequel! ^^ so Loki is ignoring her or something? It seems like he has a lot on his mind or something.. Hmm.. Idk. It was his own idea, but I'm guessing her refusal and words will have a huge impact. Not only on him.. But his ego.. Hmm.. Learning how to fight? According to the summary that's a good idea for her.. Hmm... Good chapter.
Yay! It's finally up! I feel bad for Eva that she is getting so much crap for rejecting his proposal. I would think that they would think to find it impossible or hard to believe that Loki actually can love or maybe they just don't care and see as a proposal from anyone is just the ultimate way of getting out of the Garden. I am with Eva on this one though, why marry someone that sees her as an object, just a mere possession. If Loki sees her as a possession, he is going to treat her like one, but if he loves her then he will treat her like the goddess she is (so close to saying human being and realized they aren't human lol) When Eva bumped into Loki I almost cringed at the ungodly reuniting even it if was brief. Poor Eva, she probably was so heartbroken to see Loki in that way and I was like damn he sure does have an extra chip on his shoulder, but when does he never? haha anyways great chapter! it was great :D
I just read all of The Garden of Lust, and I must say it was quite fantastic. Definitely looking forward to this to see what happens next between Eva and Loki.
You are an amazing writer and I would love to see this becoming a published book :D Just the way you word things is great.I can't wait for the sequel to start now :)